My god these are beautiful. I can't see what could have been better than the first one, it was truly hauntingand made me want to cry. You have magic in you writing that brings it to life. lol xx
Cub

you're a fantastic writer. i rele love your work :D these are beautiful short stories!

Beautiful, simply beautiful. I think I'll go have a look at your other stuff.

These are just so sad, they are lovely.
JM

Great story. You really captured her character. From her thoughts we were able to get her age, personality, and situation. Good job.