I love that first simile.. the whole piece is great and true that God understands us even when we cant talk.. awesome job

Great piece! You really captured the essence of your prayer. The one thing I would suggest is taking the "men's" out of the 3rd line; it sounds rather arbitrary.

Keep writing!

Wow, I like it. It's simple but true. I can say that I know exactly what you're talking about. Trying to tell God something but you can't exactly form the words but God knows what's in your heart and understands. He also puts things on your heart for you to pray for. Keep writing and God bless.

~Jeannie-Redd

Of course he does...And if you speak in the heavenly language, your spirit can talk for you...I think that's how it works anyways. Simple but nice. Good work. Keep writing. = )