LAURA keep writting this story! if you dont i will constantly remind u at school...yes that is a threat! :p

THIS IS NOT GOING TO BE A ONE SHOT ANYMORE! YOU WILL CONTINUE!

This was a very cute one-shot. It's a shame that it had to end so quickly. I hope to see you write this into a story, but the concept is really interesting.
xxnejimo

OMG the story sounds so cool is he a ghost is he a cloud of cigeret smoke who knows

Wow. I just thought that that one-shot was amazingly cute and to the point. I absolutely loved it. Good job. =] although, I was slightly disappointed to see it end so quickly- but that was the beauty of it! Loved it, for reals.

o an angel lolz. I love it! ^.^
Such a cute little one-shot.
Tell me if you get anymore reviews on this...I want to read them. lolz