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| reach4thesky 2007-12-04 ch 1,  | abuseI like it. You're right about it being rough, but it's a great start. It's a common theme, but the addition of a little hope at the end makes it unique. |
| Manda Stef. 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abusethis is really nice... i can see how it's poetic-like :) you could work on having more of a rhythm (not necessarily rhyme) to it :D but i do like it :) :D |
| poisonedpassions. 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseDon't delete this. FUll of potential, but for now its very powerful. I like it alot, so dont give up on it. Keep writing. Keep your head high **. |