It's a poem, not a song, it's flat like a poem, not flowing like a song should be but it's beautiful never-the-less.

I liked this. It wasn't that "creepy" which is the style that I prefer, but I still found it very interesting and I liked how you mentioned an iron chain. Nicely done. ~S.S.

Beautiful... I almost cried, except my sister and mother are nearby. I mean seriously... it's so... sad.