 Aslan Israel 2008-09-29 . chapter 13Wow. Very unique. I can't express enough how I just love what you've done with this. And it's the perfect length to conceivably be a definition. |
 Jack Milo 2008-05-27 . chapter 11Awesome, though I admit I had to read it several times to understood this poem. |
 The Omen 2008-03-04 . chapter 2Nice again, I just forgot to fav this... It's jast my peice of like... |
 The Omen 2008-03-04 . chapter 1Nice Beautiful and a bit crazy all of them... |
 Laura Schiller 2008-03-01 . chapter 4Whoa. Colorful...creative...fantastical...and just a little bit insane. I don't always get what you're going on about, but the poems are pretty good. |
 Dreaming Heavens 2008-02-25 . chapter 3"A Night At The Opera" is by far so far your best poem yet! I'm speechless--or whatever you call it when you write--great job. I haven't seen this style before, and I really like it. Amazing job, and sorry for my lack of a review : > |
 Aslan Israel 2008-02-24 . chapter 3The first couple lines of this were beautiful;
'Trumpet and tuba and tired trombone'-just lovely alliteration
'From across the aisle I stare; your lambent essence still lingers there' - this is just a beautiful image and the rhyme is very nice
Some of the other lines feel out of place and the rhyme forced. I also felt like you left the opera somewhere in the middle then attempted to go back to it in the end.
Much of this piece was spectacular, I just wish it had a whole feeling to it. |