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Reviews For: 100 Love Poems
Aslan Israel 2008-09-29 . chapter 13
Wow. Very unique. I can't express enough how I just love what you've done with this. And it's the perfect length to conceivably be a definition.
Jack Milo 2008-05-27 . chapter 11
Awesome, though I admit I had to read it several times to understood this poem.
The Omen 2008-03-04 . chapter 2
Nice again, I just forgot to fav this... It's jast my peice of like...
The Omen 2008-03-04 . chapter 1
Nice Beautiful and a bit crazy all of them...
Laura Schiller 2008-03-01 . chapter 4
Whoa. Colorful...creative...fantastical...and just a little bit insane. I don't always get what you're going on about, but the poems are pretty good.
Dreaming Heavens 2008-02-25 . chapter 3
"A Night At The Opera" is by far so far your best poem yet! I'm speechless--or whatever you call it when you write--great job. I haven't seen this style before, and I really like it. Amazing job, and sorry for my lack of a review : >
Aslan Israel 2008-02-24 . chapter 3
The first couple lines of this were beautiful;
'Trumpet and tuba and tired trombone'-just lovely alliteration
'From across the aisle I stare; your lambent essence still lingers there' - this is just a beautiful image and the rhyme is very nice

Some of the other lines feel out of place and the rhyme forced. I also felt like you left the opera somewhere in the middle then attempted to go back to it in the end.

Much of this piece was spectacular, I just wish it had a whole feeling to it.
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