Reviews for A Bit Touched in the Mind

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Fariy Lights 2008-07-23 ch 21,	abuseEven though it shouldn't be... that was really funny when the pastor came. I wouldn't like to be Mae...
sarahrules336 2008-07-23 ch 21,	abusehaha that's hilarious actually. it probably shouldn't be, but so ridiculous
Anonymous D. Disclosure 2008-07-23 ch 21,	abuseTHANK YOU FOR UPDATING! I can not believe that her own mother would behave like that. Those are the type of people who shouldn't be raising kids. it's amazing that Mae turned out the way she did. And she just making things up to justify herself . . . . not God. She's manipulating the truth. Did i mention that i hate her mom? Aw no Seth this chapter. Tear drops :*(
Izzey 2008-07-23 ch 21,	abuselol. i cannot believe they called the pastor. lol. thats hilarious.
Tpolich 2008-07-22 ch 21,	abuseI figured something like this was going to happen, no way were her parents just going to accept her. She can't go home for the time being, I guess she could bunk at Seth's house for a few days. His mom would understand. I found the exorcism to be quite funny even if it was basically a disowning by her parents (They think she is possessed, ie not their daughter when in fact she is so the part they are trying to get rid of is herself). At least that is how I interpreted it. I am wondering what your going to have her reaction be, I am expecting it to be somewhere along the lines of 'Fine I knew that was going to happen'. The chapter felt a little short, not sure if it really was. While it might have been/felt that way this was a really important chapter, her parents now know about her 'powers'. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous D. Disclosure 2008-07-18 ch 20,	abuseW.O.W. Seriously . . . no other words can possibly be spoken! I am in awe! Not just because it is amazingly written, or that it has an amazing and original plot line. But i love how you brought God into the story! It's overly touching and a nice change. Not many people do it. Not many people can even pull it off. But you did, and it's amazing. And i love reading it. Although i do feel that Mae's parents follow all the wrong things about Christianity. They need to get their priorities straight! LOVE Seth and Mae! Please update ASAP!!
dreamingeye 2008-07-13 ch 20,	abusethis is such an awesome story! you are an AMAZING writer! i love the plot and how well it is connected. I really liked how well you developed all your characters. you have done a wonderful job! keep up the awesome work! i cant wait for the next chapter! :)
iPod 2008-07-13 ch 20,	abuseThat.. That... that **! I totally never ever EVER suspected it to be Brent! O.o But... still, how did Doug know where they were gonna be? Oh! Another mind reader?!
sarahrules336 2008-07-13 ch 20,	abuseoh wow. that's a surprise. i like it. update soon!
Im. The. Angel. Of. Darknes... 2008-07-12 ch 20,	abuseah love it!
Izzey 2008-07-12 ch 20,	abuseoh my God! what happens? please update really soon!
Kyazain Kuriauota 2008-07-12 ch 20,	abuseOf course. Once again we are left dangling on the edge of a cliff. My fingers are getting tired from all this hanging. I suppose your going to hold it for a few days again. We'll be waiting!
Fariy Lights 2008-07-12 ch 20,	abuseDang... I was wrong... Le sigh. Anway, you have a thing for evil cliffies. It does not ammuse me. tries not to smile
Cass Boothe 2008-07-12 ch 20,	abuseAh, cliffy. How I loathe thee, yet welcome the anticipation for the next chapter.
Fariy Lights 2008-07-10 ch 19,	abuseIt is totally her co-worker at Hot Topic... I know it is! Hahah! evil laughter

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