OMG I can't believe that she just said that.. the last line I mean. But yeah, that is cute. And it is true, she could let him die. Well, even if she didn't ever see him again, at least she could say that she kissed a hot guy and saved his life haha

Love the story!

*Ngoc1231*

lol! awesome!

cute remake of little mermaid! haha...the fact that you used the disney names made me laugh! good job!

Oh wow, that's so good. The last part, especially. I will never stop loving happy, romantic endings.

HHEHEHEH I had a blond moment the whole Arial thing, i didn't quite catch onto the Little Mirmaid thing. Lol. I liked it, and I really enjoy your style of writing its different with cute little twists.

Obsession

ha ha ha! that was really good. really different. To be completely honest I liked everything up to the last line. I don't know why so much,I guess I liked the ending of your cinderella one a little bit better. I mean I get where you're going, ending up with a bit of verbal diarreah and whatever but for future reference when you end sometimes it's better to end not with dialogue but with a description or a dialogue following description only because it leaves the reader with an actual picture in their minds as opposed to words...if you get what I'm saying. Other than my little pet peeve, that was really really good! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!

CUUTE

well done

aww cute! is doing CPR counted as kissing?

love it

I like your style missy :) You're quite talanted. Good story!

lolzz so kutee