|Reviews for My effective charcoal pill|
| Ngoc1231 7/26/10 . chapter 1
OMG I can't believe that she just said that.. the last line I mean. But yeah, that is cute. And it is true, she could let him die. Well, even if she didn't ever see him again, at least she could say that she kissed a hot guy and saved his life haha
Love the story!
| AlijaS117 7/5/09 . chapter 1
| EnchantedKorean 11/11/08 . chapter 1
cute remake of little mermaid! haha...the fact that you used the disney names made me laugh! good job!
| Green Eyed Angel 10/19/08 . chapter 1
Oh wow, that's so good. The last part, especially. I will never stop loving happy, romantic endings.
| Obsession Changes Things 8/29/08 . chapter 1
HHEHEHEH I had a blond moment the whole Arial thing, i didn't quite catch onto the Little Mirmaid thing. Lol. I liked it, and I really enjoy your style of writing its different with cute little twists.
| cj 7/14/08 . chapter 1
ha ha ha! that was really good. really different. To be completely honest I liked everything up to the last line. I don't know why so much,I guess I liked the ending of your cinderella one a little bit better. I mean I get where you're going, ending up with a bit of verbal diarreah and whatever but for future reference when you end sometimes it's better to end not with dialogue but with a description or a dialogue following description only because it leaves the reader with an actual picture in their minds as opposed to words...if you get what I'm saying. Other than my little pet peeve, that was really really good! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!
| RoseLife 4/16/08 . chapter 1
| floopfloop 1/17/08 . chapter 1
aww cute! is doing CPR counted as kissing?
| Elegantly Lovelyy 12/16/07 . chapter 1
| Pinkamoo 12/9/07 . chapter 1
I like your style missy :) You're quite talanted. Good story!
| TwinkleHeart 12/4/07 . chapter 1
lolzz so kutee