Reviews for Aesthetic Sin - FictionPress.com

Swabbie 2007-12-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseI think the simplicity of the lines with the depth of thought that they convey. Very cool! Also, it reminds me a bit of a few of our emails... hahaha.
Romance-luver222 2007-12-07 ch 1,	abuseWow...that was really cool. I like how you brouht in the seven sins...ironically, I'm watching Se7en right now as I'm reading the rest of your stuff...lol. But wow...I didn't realize that Gwen was the last...wait...WHAT ABOUT ALDRICK?! He's not dead...I don't think. Yes, at least one of my fav characters survived. Unlike my fav...gr. lol. Anyway, great poem. It flowed very nicely and just really worked with both Gwen and the other story. I really loved it. Great job!
simpleplan13 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseinteresting that you think that is the vain is the most important/powerful sin... I also like how you dont say what it is.. so if you dont know the 7 sins you wouldnt know what it is... nicely done