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Reviews For: Rain Drop

Creating a Dream 2007-12-07 ch 1,	abusei love the line: "you know that one day your emotions will collide". not sure why, but that line just pulled itself out from the rest of your beautiful poem and hurled itself at me. a beautiful image of a rain drenched world, you've created here! and the emotions you've chosen are so perfect for my life right now, it takes my breath away! yours for at least a moment, Creating a Dream
Tommy Atkins 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseI like the parallel comparisons. Don't be afraid to step outside of the box however. Are you new to poetry, or just new to the site. It was very good. You captured what I feel to be the true nature of a poet with this. I liked it. Keep up the writing.
simpleplan13 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseI like the rhyming a lot and I also like how you go from rain to the person... that was great
Possessed Pencil 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseit was interesting, the rhythm was somewhat off balance in some parts...but it was good.:)
poisonedpassions. 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseWow. I really do like this. Its flowing, with rhythm. Its very good metaphorical writing. Anyways keep up the good writing. Keep your head high. **.