Aw, that was especially sweet.

wow... this is VERY well written. great job ^_^

r u from U.K.? it's just that in third grade i remember some guy from england who came to our school and would ask "where's the loo?" (that means bathroom right?)and he would spell favourite and colour. ny way great story!

Wonderful story! The descriptions are so good. I could seriously eat your story. lol. There isn't a part I don't like. It's classic, the right amount of child-like charm, the moral is good... I was just craving a cookie too... Glad I read your story instead. Again, wonderful job!!

Write on!