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| Aneira - Snow 2007-12-14 ch 1,  | abuseOh, my god. I write poems like this all the time! Haha, but yours is better than what I usually write. :) I love it. |
| Alphabetical Dreams 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseyour lush, rich, and intense words have me feeling a bit light headed. this poem is beautifully colorful, in more than one sense! toy have so many descriptive words, it paints a most lovely picture in my mind's eye. i find myself wanting more and more of your melt-in-the-mouth poems! |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abusebeautiful description of a sunset... i like the lines "collage of colors/making a picture" a lot |
| Man on the Side 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseNice, I like it. It's like your painting a picture and I could really see it. |
| cassiesheart 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good,its like i am really there. |