Brother,

I've read this time and again and I'm finally getting around to reviewing it. A little slow, but you know me, nothing I do is too quick.

Anyways, this is an amazing perspective on life, because we all end up seeing what we want to see, not what needs to be seen. However bear and brutal this may be, I enjoyed it. I can't wait for the next one.

"Non fottere con me o romperò il sua braccio."
"Don't ** with me, or I'll break your arm."

_Vincent, SN

i think you're right Mob, about everything, including God, being tainted by these people...but did you ever think that maybe their view might be tainted as well? You couldn't blame a child for doing something wrong when he or she doesn't know it's wrong. They were taught that way. Don't blame the effect-blame the creator of the effect-whoever that turns out to be.
I think it's up to our generation (and you and Vince are doing a great job of this) to wake ourselves up from our comatose and start changing the tides for generations to come. Faith (i abhor the term religion b/c that's not what it's supposed to be viewed as...something I've woken up to myself), Reality, the People around us...everything we've been taught needs to be swiped away so that we can start again and perhaps figure out the truth behind it all. Like a medical case from a hundred years ago come back to today. When nothing makes sense/leads to a sensible conclusion-it's time to wipe everything off the white board and start over again with the basics and try to find the truth from that.
So, don't blame the effected, blame the effector. And are you willing to go further and be an effector of truth for our generation? Not just on fictionpress, but everywhere?

-Irony