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| crazyrandomgirl888 2008-06-19 ch 1,  | abusereally sad...D: |
| TheDJ 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseI thought that the varience in the length of the stanzas, as well as the free rhyming added a hugh amount to this poem -- drawing distinct contrast to the subject of the poem. The way you made each stanza reflect on, and often rebut, what was in the last also added to the appreciation of the indecision ("Maybe it's the good kind, maybe it's the bad kind, maybe i'll just do t and find out, Maybe it'll make me feel better. You never know, But I know). The raw emotion in this was so apparent. And I'm sorry. |
| amythestpony 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseaw! Reenee is this about a certain someone I know? I hope everything is okay...can I help? It was a beautiful song, just so sad :( |