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| theCoffeeEnzyme 2007-12-04 ch 1,  | abuseOh my heavans. This was stunning. Sadly, I've only read it once through; the circumstances of my surroundings don't permit any real appreciation for the time being. But, I can say that this was very impressive. I loved the sound of it, the mix of words, the alliteration, it was all so good. It flows through perfectly and it's ambiguous enough to be personal to the reader without being confusing and trivial. Very good. |