Lee Darien

Grr... I knew that if I read the second chapter I would soon regret it since I knew there was not another chapter afterward. You just HAD to leave off on a cliffy! Thanks a lot... Oh well, this chapter once again captured my interest and you have made me grown to love the characters even more. So that means you must update and soon! Please, do it not just because me, along with others, are begging you to... do it for my sanity. Otherwise if you don't I may go insane from not knowing what happens next!

Plus if you don't update soon, I will send my army of penguins wielding sharp pencils and plastic knifes to attack you (and you better not think I won't!) :P

Anyway, good good! I love this story!

~Topaz36

Lee Darien,

Man, I knew you could write, but I never would've imagined how well and fluid your words were. Granted, I noticed some grammatically mistakes here and there(mostly just confusing common words that sound alike and just some typos that come with typing something quickly :D), nonetheless, even those little mistakes were not enough to distract me from being engrossed by this story. Again, I was impressed by how imaginative and creative this story is, and I haven't even finished reading it.

As a fellow author who is attempting to write in a genre similar to this, I am already learning how I can improve my story by just reflecting some of your cleverness and wit that I have viewed in your story.

My only suggestion for you is to maybe break this chapter up into multiple chapters (even though I can understand why you may not want to).

This story is just mind boggling. Who knew that poor Kara would be thrust into this new and confusing world? I do admit, I am quite fond of Jared and I am interested in seeing how you tie this story up.

Again, wonderful job!

~Topaz36

*stares*
*stares*
*stares*

What? It stop there? MORE! Now! :D

...please? :P

Yes! A new chapter! I've been waiting for what seems like forever. Shorter than last time, but that's cool by me. This was awesome I love what Kara did for Jared (sweet in a kind of I'd give my life for you). I was kind of surprised because I was thinking that Thomas was the bad guy that came into the house at night (maybe he still is a bad guy?). The monster-futureseeing guy, now there was a twist. But, oh no!, another cliffhanger. You're torturing me with this you know. This was really awesome and I can't wait for more!

OMG A cliffy! I love this story!
If Maxegirl1313 didn't take the spot of your number one fan i sure would!
~ Well I guess I could do this.
~Your #2 fan Ivey~

Oh my goodnes! This story is AMAZING! I loved it so much great job!
My friend who is your number 1 fan was talking about you and I wanted to read this!
Awesome!

AH! you left me a cliffie!

jeez im gonna die from suspense!

dont be evil like that!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! OR ELSE I MIGHT KILL SOME-ONE FROM THE
'needs-to-read-the-awesome-est-story-ever' dieses (it can happen)

I really enjoyed this story. It was really well-thought out and I was never bored with any part + the characters were really well-developed.

Wow this has got to be one of my favorite stories ever! you are a very talented Author! please,pleas,pleas dont forget about this story and update soon!

your #1 fan
~Maxe~