it's good to see that you still write amazing stories... i loved this

YoungChica I was wondering how I could word the intro to show that it was horror, but I had no idea. So I just let people read it and think what they wanted. Once they hit the end they'd see the method to my madness.
And it was a plague. Probably a feline flu that mutated.
Cheers.

Jesus! That was ackward! I was trying to figure out why this was in horror, but now I can see why =D
Was it the plague? Zombies?
Rachael.

Very nice. You captured children's bickering perfectly and the presentation of the twist was superb!

Oh. Wow.
Though I don't really understand the story--what exactly happend?-- it was chilling nonetheless. Wonderful job!