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| IKnowIKnowNothing 2008-07-11 ch 22,  | abuseI hv just finished this story... its really nice, i just wish that Erik would not die... Anyhow Elli character was fantastic... |
| Bellaria 2008-07-09 ch 22, | abusethat was soo sad... i loved it though, very interesting. well done!! Da Boch Bellaria |
| CrazyCowgirl101 2008-07-06 ch 22, | abuseAw! Cory finally got his happy ending. GREAT job! I always wondered how to write mysteries because i just can't seem to get it right . . . Keep up your fabulous writing skills, Madi |
| CrazyCowgirl101 2008-07-06 ch 20, | abuseIf Cory dies, I am going to hunt you down and kill you! That is not an empty threat! |
| CrazyCowgirl101 2008-07-06 ch 19, | abuseNo! |
| CrazyCowgirl101 2008-07-06 ch 18, | abuseIt was Jill, wasn't it? I don't know why i just never liked her . . . GREAT job. |
| CrazyCowgirl101 2008-07-06 ch 16, | abuseHa! I knew i didn't like Patrick. I knew it. The patrick's i know aren't very nice. . . .maybe its a name thing. Good job wiht this story! I didn't want to go to bed last night, but i was afraid i would fall sleep reading i was so tired. |
| Songorita 2008-06-26 ch 22, | abuseGreat story! Loved it. I also read your other stories, once again great. |
| Tecna 2008-05-18 ch 22, | abuseNow this is a story that one would love to read! I enjoyed it immensely! It's absolutely well written and the settings, emotions, drama etc is so well played out. It's like a proper novel, it's brilliant! It has great action and adventure, and also the development one stage at a time is amazing, to sum it up in one word is to say it's perfect! I loved it! I'm so glad I found it, the relationships are superb! Great work! Tecna ;) |
| mythweav.r 2008-05-14 ch 22, anon. | abusewow... i'm certainly glad i read your story. While I started off with many tears (because of poor Ella and Erik) and some frustrated annoyance (at the inadequate detective guesswork earlier on), the story leaves me with a warm fuzzy feeling and a smile on my face. This is a feel good story and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks very much! :) |
| mythweav.r 2008-05-14 ch 21, anon. | abuseaw... what Cory signed on the cast is so sweet!! (*laughs* this story makes me go aw so often) |
| mythweav.r 2008-05-14 ch 18, anon. | abuseamazing how the cops again didn't consider all possibilities and took Jill into consideration. |
| mythweav.r 2008-05-14 ch 15, anon. | abuseaw... that's so sad! She buying her deceased brother christmas presents! :_( oohh.. but the story's moving along! moving along! :) |
| mythweav.r 2008-05-13 ch 9, anon. | abuseAw.. you're so right! I would sniff a shirt that had my boyfriend's scent on it. Ah... I miss the thrill and excitement of meeting someone new. Lucky Ella! |
| mythweav.r 2008-05-13 ch 7, anon. | abusehaha.. seems like Cory isn't always Mr. Tough Guy.. Trudi reads him pretty well. *laughs* |