That was really sweet :) Thanks

beautiful...
i loved every bit of it..

Absolutely magnificent!
It was really well done, and not corny. Good job! :)

this is cute..i love the way its written.

I first read this story quite a long time ago, but I've since found myself coming back to read it again and again. It's absolutely brilliant. The plot is just enough to whet the reader's appetite without making it seem like a PWP. The smut is bloody hot! And the romance is just perfect, not sappy, not underwhelming. You write beautifully.

SEXIST!

the guy just demands and she does anything he asks her too.

that fricking ** me off...

that is all.

An utterly wonderful story that made me wish I could find my soulmate. Thank you for writing it.

ohmygosh. i'm in love with this.

Love your story!
Esp all the scenes that built up till the end...
=D

This little story of yours is HOT!

Absolutely love it. I've read it a few times and have yet to not enjoy it.

Well done, my dear, well done indeed.

i loved this.

I love this... Grayson and Jordan... Sigh...

love it :)

Wonderful piece and usually there are not very many that I would comment on. But this was amazing and lovely, I do hope you continue on with this even though it was just a oneshot XP

Wow, a great one shot!