This is a sick story. And I'm a sick, sick person for liking it. ):

I honestly couldn't stop laughing at your notes. I liked the story it was good. I usually don't read short stories and I really like this one. anyways here you go since you asked SO kindly for a review. >_

I think he defeated the beast. I feel kind of bad for the next man sent into the labyrinth.

that was ... incredibly weird ... and disturbing ...

I review for the hot man that was promised on top... just kidding. anyway, totally weird imagining some oversized bull head on a hot humanbody but good story. You should write one with male sirens and a super smexy hero on a boat but then again I fail at writing so I might not take my advise...

While I really enjoyed this story, I found two things that you might want to change:

“His eyes flickered back up to the monster; dared he risk it?” – I believe that it should read, “dare he risk it?” instead.

“Shoving its monstrous head against the floor to breath in the dust of crushed bones,” – In this case, the correct spelling would be “breathe.”

I also really liked how you ended it ambiguously, leaving the rest up to the reader’s imagination. :]

-Avvy

O_O Well, definitely different than the original. But somehow seems like it would fit into Greek mythology perfectly... Therocles was a bit of a horny bugger, wasn't he? And the Minotaur...well, he'd been stuck down there for an awful long time. XD I love the summary of the fluff ending.

This was really well written, and I like how you didn't start every sentence with 'he'.

And, well, as soon as I read your summary, I knew what was going to happen, but I still thought it was really good anyway. A nice twist at the end might have been a Salome-style killing, but maybe that's just me?

And, I'll be honest: I laughed so much (in a good way?) when they were having sex. It just...I don't know why. it just made me laugh. xD. I loved it :D.

personally i'm glad you didn't put in the "fluff" ending. it's more realistic.

Uh...that was...unexpected? But still good, I think? Da...

Okay. Am reviewing for the hot man/honey, will expect him in the morning. >.>

This was quite interesting. What would have made it more interesting was if after the deed was done, he chopped the things head off anyways. But that might just be my view. Anyways, very well written - you get the sense that the main character, Therocles, is a no nonsense guy.

I really like this ending more than the first. Also the whole sex scene was better in my opinion. I liked it. =D

As I said before, horny man. And horny monster.

I really don't know what to say... interesting...weird...I don't know. Therocle went to slay it and ended up have sex with it. The horny man.

heh, i remember this story! nice twist :P i think you could have extended it a bit more, tho.

now...

WHAT ARE YOU DOING WRITING THIS WHEN YOU SHOULD BE UPDATING YOUR OTHER STORIES!

*ahem* lovely job.