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| purple x pen 2008-01-28 ch 1,  | abusei love the way you write! dont stop! and whoa 'spilled prescriptions' nice =] |
| .cupids.battlefield. 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseHorrific, yet i couldn't look away. You captured me from the first word and held my attention till the last. It was beautiful. I loved the line "tell us why you can’t breathe at night." Enchanting. ~CB |
| Slowly Sinking 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseVery powerful, scary and sad. Some wonderful imagery in here, and v effective use of bold and italics. Great job. |
| xAirAngelx 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, that awesome. I can actually see that as a song... |