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| Wicca Girl 2007-12-05 ch 1,  | abuseOMG I luv it cant wait 4 a new chap. UPDATE ASAP! |
| Slowly Sinking 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abusethis is really powerful, I think it works better this way than it would as a sleepover because it really puts the emphasis on the narrator's thoughts and feelings. I love the way it develops, and the ending is very powerful. A shocking piece because of it's simplicity, it's very to the point which works wonderfully. Great job. |
| Kneeling Glory 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseI think this works great as notes passed back and forth. I don't think you could get the same amount of reflection in if you had the characters actually talking to one another. Is there going to be a part two? |