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| jojoba-music-girl 2008-08-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is sad. But it's very well written. I love how you wrote the conversations down, it's all part of the whole story. Great job! |
| black*tears*of*innocence 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuse(*Stares with mouth open*) I.Am.Speechless. Oh my Goodness! This does NOT belong in scraps. Again, another story that drags me in from the beggining and keeps me hooked until the very last word. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I could feel every emotion of each character. I could practically HEAR them saying each word. I felt almost like I was in the room with them! This is absolutely amazing!! I love it! please keep writing! You have such a telant and your work just keeps getting better and better!! |
| Michael Dempsey 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseLouisa was right - she IS horrible. Urgh, bitch. I felt nothing at all for her and am completely glad that she committed suicide. :P (And I hope to God this is the reaction you were wanting from the reader :S) I'm curious about this line: "...I wouldn’t be with you if you were…” How is that supposed to end? 'Sane'? That would be good! Anyway, another good story, wolfeh. *cockney accent* Keep ap va good wirk! :D |