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Faith Adeline
2008-03-02
ch 3,
abusethis cracks me up. great story so far, and I can't wait for more so update soon!
Faith
Moose
2008-02-19
ch 3, anon.
abuseI kinda liked your story. Not sure her motivation for hating Christmas though.
And sadly, you turned me off as a reader by dissing Meg Cabot. Not saying you have to like her, but it's rude to insult an author like that.
Especially since I happen to like that her books have sex in them. bit more realistic.
Death Tastes Like Cherries
2008-02-18
ch 3,
abuseThe quote is from Lex Luthor to Clark Kent in Smallville. That's my guess. Keep writing.
emily
2008-02-17
ch 3, anon.
abusehey christine ..xD

so idk im so sick right now i cant think straight. and if you dont even know where that quote is from..WHO WOULD KNOW. lol

this is a stupid review.. i just rad the chapter but i dont even rememebr what happened xD
..
mam
noriepie
2008-02-02
ch 3,
abusehehee
"fartknocker"

you crack me up.
doritos-luvah
2008-02-02
ch 3, anon.
abuseWasn't it Lex who said it to Clark? Smallville...I swear it sounds familiar...I think when they first started airing Smallville on ABC Family, it was in the promos...Lex saying that to Clark.

Oh well, nice chapter.
The Sleep Of Reason
2008-02-02
ch 3,
abuseElijah is quoting what Lex Luther says to Clark in that season of Smallville "Trust me, Clark. Our friendship is going to be the stuff of legends"

Oh and Nice Stroy By The Way
Sincerely,
The Sleep Of Reason
Tapioooca
2008-02-02
ch 3,
abuseI can't tell you what Elijah is quoting, but it looks so painfully familiar that I KNOW it's going to bug the crap out of me until I figure it out.

But, yeah. Another lovely chapter featuring the not-so-lovely but still incredibly likable Mara (and I highly doubt anything she does in the future will change my opinion of her).

Again, that's all I got.

Keep up the great work, and good luck in the SKOW Awards! ...Whatever they are
I Quoth Nevermore
2008-02-01
ch 3,
abuseBrilliant. I love your character--she's such a snobby brat. LoL. Love it! Update soon! Now I'm going to VOTE FOR YOU! Yippee!
fortuneismymuse
2008-02-01
ch 3,
abuseYour story has a kind of dark sort of mood to it... but I guess it's supposed to be like that. Or maybe I'm just feeling down. But anyway, I love the way that you write! And I noticed that about Meg Cabot too... it's in all of her books. And the Princess Diaries really just need to end.

Anyway, this is going on my alert list! :)
emily
2008-01-30
ch 2, anon.
abuseyeah babaay. we are BACK. whoo! this is soo good! so funny!
seriously your writing holds my attention, and you should get an award for that. =D

i already like mara. even though you say shes stupid. =D

D E
im so bored. its cold in my house. and i need an asprin.


ok well go study for your vocab test. actually. dont stay on and talk to me =D

love you
DancingChaChaFruit
2008-01-28
ch 2,
abuseHello, Sally darling. =) I am actually sitting here at my computer typing this to you for several reasons:

A.) I realized I'd never actually reviewed this story. I like the premise for it. It's interesting. And Mara kind of reminds me of myself, even though that's not exactly a good thing. (Except I love Christmas, so yeah.) Actually, that's a lie. Her attitude is somewhat similar to mine, except not really. I'm making no sense. But I can surmise that if we were to meet in person, we wouldn't be friends. And that's that. I do hope you continue this, even though it's been about a month since you last updated.

B.) To inform you that ILIMIYD gave me inspiration. I was in this really mood where I didn't feel like doing ANYTHING. I didn't want to read, or write, or be on my computer, or do homework, or basically just do anything that required breathing. So I decided to read ILIMIYD again. And got to the ... seventh (?) before being inspired to write. Why yes, I give you the right to act conceited about this. =)

C.) To inform you that I reread CNSTOC yesterday (or Saturday, I don't remember), just because I wanted to. And I liked it, too, of course, the first time around. And I was in the mood for your sort of writing. (Or at least, the sort of writing in CNSTOC.)

D.) To congratulate you on your recent SKoW nomination. So congratluations! That's so awesome. =) (Most Memorable, if you didn't happen to know this yet.) Though it sucks that we're running against each other (Smooth Move got nominated for that too). I'm bummed. Because if it weren't for the fact that I have to suppot my own story, I would totally vote for you. (You understand, right? Hopefully.)

And um. Yeah. That's what I had to say. Be seeing (writing to) you! =)
okusei
2008-01-04
ch 2,
abuseHAH. I'm so with Mara on this one: Christmas annoys the crap out of me. Seriously, you shouldn't need to buy your kid a $500 MP3 player to keep him happy. Sheesh.

...Ahem.

I like the beginning. Mara seems like a very interesting character, and the story has an interesting plot line going for it. Can't wait to read more. ^^
Skervydog
2007-12-28
ch 2,
abuseI like it alot so far! My favourite was the "running of the bulls in Pamplona." That's exactly what dinnertime is like in our house! And Mara is a great character. Anxiously awaiting more...
Tapioooca
2007-12-24
ch 2,
abuseMara's awesome. Really awesome. And I can't wait to see what happens to her next. And, uh... that's really all I got. Reviewing stuff isn't exactly one of my strengths.

But, yeah. Keep up the awesomeness. And enjoy your holiday!
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