 a beginner 2009-06-27 . chapter 3thanks for being here and having a passion for writing... u rock... |
 crunchiez 2009-03-20 . chapter 3AHAHA i love your story xP
and i know where you got the quote =]
smallville!
continue your awesometastic writing skills :D |
 JV Hi-Fi 2009-01-18 . chapter 3Hey,
So far this story sounds good and I look forward to reading more. Elijah is quoting Lex Luther from a Smallville episode back in 'o2. "Trust me Clark, our friendship is going to be the stuff of legend." |
 fatso17 2009-01-11 . chapter 3Haha. I love Mara's (Mary?) sarcasm. The dry wit is very amusing to read. Gotta love those kinds of people (as in people with that kind of personality). *chuckles* |
 Duuude 2008-09-18 . chapter 3Wee. I like Elijah. He's funny. =)
And it seems like ALL of your stories are good. How do you do it? *is shocked*
This is pretty funny. Especially when the little cream puff waggled his eyebrows and patted the seat next to him.
And the crap about Everlasting Eternal Peaceful Loving Prince Leader King Messiah Eternal Forever Loving Merciful King Lord
XD It goes on forever.
I think I'll stick to God. Haha.
Great so far. I wish you'd update soon. =)
I KNOW! I KNOW! That quote is from SMALLVILLE! HAHA.
OK, I'm lying I didn't know where it was from but I looked it up on the internet. =X
Update soon please. |
 Pop the Bubble 2008-09-17 . chapter 3hahahaha nice...
not sure where the elijah quotes from, but i like this twist on a story :D
AND THANK GOD!
someone else who hates meg cabot as much as i do!
some of them (sans the sex) are good for fluff reading, although i'd usually just rather read something better.
-cough- update? |
 A.M. Dawson 2008-08-16 . chapter 3SMALLVILLE! :) (yes, I am cool like that thanks.)
p.s
Thats not random, its just who he quoted.. (i think) |
 Faith Adeline 2008-03-02 . chapter 3this cracks me up. great story so far, and I can't wait for more so update soon!
Faith |
 Moose 2008-02-19 . chapter 3 I kinda liked your story. Not sure her motivation for hating Christmas though.
And sadly, you turned me off as a reader by dissing Meg Cabot. Not saying you have to like her, but it's rude to insult an author like that.
Especially since I happen to like that her books have sex in them. bit more realistic. |
 Death Tastes Like Cherries 2008-02-18 . chapter 3The quote is from Lex Luthor to Clark Kent in Smallville. That's my guess. Keep writing. |
 emily 2008-02-17 . chapter 3 hey christine ..xD
so idk im so sick right now i cant think straight. and if you dont even know where that quote is from..WHO WOULD KNOW. lol
this is a stupid review.. i just rad the chapter but i dont even rememebr what happened xD
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mam |
 noriepie 2008-02-02 . chapter 3hehee
"fartknocker"
you crack me up. |
 doritos-luvah 2008-02-02 . chapter 3 Wasn't it Lex who said it to Clark? Smallville...I swear it sounds familiar...I think when they first started airing Smallville on ABC Family, it was in the promos...Lex saying that to Clark.
Oh well, nice chapter. |
 The Sleep Of Reason 2008-02-02 . chapter 3Elijah is quoting what Lex Luther says to Clark in that season of Smallville "Trust me, Clark. Our friendship is going to be the stuff of legends"
Oh and Nice Stroy By The Way
Sincerely,
The Sleep Of Reason |
 Tapioooca 2008-02-02 . chapter 3I can't tell you what Elijah is quoting, but it looks so painfully familiar that I KNOW it's going to bug the crap out of me until I figure it out.
But, yeah. Another lovely chapter featuring the not-so-lovely but still incredibly likable Mara (and I highly doubt anything she does in the future will change my opinion of her).
Again, that's all I got.
Keep up the great work, and good luck in the SKOW Awards! ...Whatever they are |