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| Peskypiskie 2008-09-13 ch 3,   | Amazing! Simply amazing! Beautifully crafted and entrancing. I loved it so much! |
| huntsong 2007-12-26 ch 2, | Beautiful chapter. I love how vividly you describe places and people that are only vaugly covered in Greek myth. Keep up the good work! |
| Arabella Smith 2007-12-23 ch 2, | Haha I like it. It's very good! Update soon! |
| The Witches of Salaverry 2007-12-21 ch 1, | I really like this story so far! The writing is very good and I am so glad that you have given Hades some soul and mystery and he is not just a greedy rapist. The only thing we found from a reader's perspective is that Persephone doesn't really seem that horrified to be down there? Anyways, update soon this is really good! |
| trippiekittie 2007-12-19 ch 2, | wonderful imagery. persphone's personality is just as i would have imagined one of the greek gods and goddesses to act. stellar writing. |
| mishiema 2007-12-19 ch 2, | Your summary certainly doesn't lie. This retelling definately is fresh. I like all of the different things that you've done with this story, like how Hades won't talk. That gives it a definate original element. Your writing is neat, solid and lively. I have high hopes for this. Cheers, Mishiema |
| trippiekittie 2007-12-13 ch 1, | spetacular use of imagery. truly spectacular. i look forward to reading if you continue and am prepared to pine if you don't. poor aphrodite, always cast as the bad girl... i'm guilty of it too. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-12-08 ch 1, | wow. ur really good with imagrey. this is a good story, so will Hades be amazingly hot and misunderstood? cause those are the best stories. definetley the best. update soon! |
| i wish i could delete this 2007-12-08 ch 1, | omg. I am going to just shut up and stop writing. You are like my idol. Something about your story is just magical. It just seems real. I am totally going to add you to my favorite authors list to share this story with my friends. I tried to write a Hades and Persephone story, but it pales in comparison to yours. Please, for the love of god, write more. H's and K's, A Touch of Insanity |
| Anita Tseu 2007-12-07 ch 1, | Awesome! I've always wanted to read retellings of Greek Mythology ^_^ and now I can...So, cool story, update soon please ^_^ hahaha Aphrodite was called that lol. Hm...Ficionpress is not that bad...but of course Fanfiction is much better ^_^ lol. |
| huntsong 2007-12-05 ch 1, | Wonderful first chapter. I love retellings of old myths and this looks very promising. Nice description of Aphrodite, by the way ;) |