I absolutely loved this! The emotions here were so real and breathtaking. This blew me away.

Oh, so sad... My heart went out to the girl T.T *sniffle... lol* i love your style of writing

It's the end? That's it?? You sure there isnt more?!?! Ah! It was satisfying and good. :) I liked your word choice as well. Espiecally the beginning was very soothing and easy going with a tint of anxiety attached. ;) Good job.

I'm definitely a fan of this genre (considering I write it) so of course I'm thrilled to see this story! Congrats on making it into My my C2 Community. As a horror/angst/gothic romance author I felt as if stories like these needed more attention so I made a C2 Committed to the dark ones that were well-written.

*faves* You did this justice, and I definitely enjoyed reading it. Keep up the grand work!

AH!
haven't seen much work from you lately... but this is a GREAT MAKEUP ASSIGNMENT! its really well written, i like the way the "50 seconds" thing at the begining ties in at the end, honestly i just thought it was a random tidbit until i read the ending. Really great! C'EST TRES BIEN ECRIT! J'ADORE SA, TRES BONNE MA CHERE! ^^
0_0 absolutely love the ending!
ciao bella!

-miku XD
question: did she die at the end? i think she did. Tht Hide chick ish such a flubben **! GAH!
*drowns her cartoonily*

Wonderful job! It's horribly sad, though, and makes part of me want to start bawling like a baby and scream "WHY?!"
Heh, very reminiscint of Romea and Juliet, or at least, in my opinion, it is.

This was fantastic, period. The tension, the mystery and the feelings of both Katsu and the narrator were overpowering in this story, making it a great read. Your description and flow of words were just poetic, but I wish you'd be more clear about the plot. Halfway through, I got confused and had to re-read the top half to get a cleaer view of what was happening. Then again, maybe it's just me.

Nevertheless, I enjoyed this oneshot very much.

Nanao