Reviews for Captured: A Silent Death in the Still Moments

Isca 2008-09-27 ch 1,	abuseJ.V., I must say, this is my favourite piece by you so far. It's superior quality and vivid diction make it wonderful. It was a pleasure to read, and I have no criticism for it. I loved the repetition of 'Marie, Marie.' It made the poem feel so real and honest. The description of the girl pulling the trigger of the gun, the flowing blood, I mean WOW! That was my favourite part. :D
concerto49 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseHaven't read a poem in a bit, so here goes. Wow, I have to say you really do bring surprises. I couldn't imagine drawing those references together. Maybe you think differently, but it was vivid and good. It sounds a little like a song even, and feels very active in engaging the reader. It is kind of deep and sad. Especially the way it ended. It's alright - besides maybe a few glitches, I don't really have much to say about it. I mean other than that it was pretty cool. :)
fatbird33 2008-03-01 ch 1,	abusevery nice. very creative. i love it when people write poems on paintings.
Fantasmic 2007-12-09 ch 1,	abuseHeyo, I don't know how long ago you submitted this cause it's on my comcast account and I never check that :D Anywho, this is one of my favorites, it's so sad D: But quite well written. You amaze meh as a writer my dahling!