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no.peace.los.angeles 2008-01-13 . chapter 1
Wow. Angsty. I love the last line - it's very evocative. And brings some imagery to the piece. I love the way it starts, too, like it's coming in from something that's already been said. Lovely. Keep writing! :)
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