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| Arnieth 1/28/08 . chapter 1
beautiful. I thought at first that this was someone who was sick and in a hospital and then as I continued to read I thought suicide in the ocean. you weren't alone in thinking sex I have 4 others. and you were all wrong. Its about a compeditive swimmer going back to the pool after being away for to favs
| Inflaming Kaliope 12/6/07 . chapter 1
It is cute in a sad way. I like it.
"My sore throat cleared for one last breath,
Waves part to crash as tears meld against the sea.
How was I to know I’d be alone?"
"Turning blue, I cannot breathe.
Shut my eyes and just accept."
Those are my favourite lines. Beautiful. Really.