Not as good as the first chapter. A few mistakes here or there and the overall effect is a bit immature.
He could at least seem more worried about the people who were killed and how they were killed.
Personally if i knew someone could get into my house and kill me while i had no defence against it, id f*ing freak out.
Use a bit more realism inside the fantasy next time, Sylvia.

Cittywolf

Yay, Sylvafish.
Me likey.
It's good. No real spelling mistakes and and impressive first chapter. I'm drawn in.

Good job, thanks for the read.
Cittywolf