This has such a deep meaning, and I really enjoyed it. I think I've read it about a hundred times to fully understand it. Well done.

a very interesting piece. i like it.

Aaw! That makes me sad...

Great job! I already can tell that you are a great author

I like this, it seems as though it is a metaphor with a deeper emotive meaning. Like one will see who true friends are in pain.

I like it. :)

This made me think for a few minutes. It's amazing how you put so much in so few words.

I love how true these really are!

I'd never heard of a choka or tanka before today. Are they Japanese, like haiku, or is this some sort of wicked cool Aussie thing I'm just starting to know?

Really good. I totally agree - I feel I understand a person once they show me their "sensitive" side.

Hey, that was a chill poem. I loved it. YOU ARE GR8 at poetry. Hope you keep on writting.

Luke

this is really good - i like the style, it's really simple but yet conveys a lot of meaning!

thanks for the review

Hm...very interesting emotions. There's hopelessness screaming out yet, there's also hopefulness, too. It seems to me that this poem sort of contradicts itself and its meaning, which is a really hard element to incorporate into pieces of writing. Awesome job!

NC

Wow!This is a beautiful thing,though,I still don't know what's a tanka?

Drop the mirror. I like that. It's like, "stop being so concerned with yourself and look at people you ignore, like me," right? At least, that's what I'm getting. )

Nicely done, I'm trying to deal with this at the present. Not going so hot, but that's not the point. Þ

Keep writing!

I like it, thanks for not changing it in any way, I find a peom losses meaning if it changed from the time of creation. Nice work.

Maggot.

Quite philosophical and well constructed. Excellent work. MD:77.

great job. I again love your endings you are great are ending them aand all.

Mandi4life