Hey Nach :D I don't know you, but I miss u when im not on here!! Love the form on this piece, and the flow of it. The way you've written the words is perfectly suited for the piece (thats a clumsy way to put it but for some reason my English Language brain is far away and I'm left with stupid common little words, sorry). write more poetry! xx

ah! absolutely amazing! i love love loved it =]

deep and dark and wonderfully written

I like your use of powerful word. Very intense emotions!