It's so depressing to read something like this.
Not that it's written badly, it's just that it makes me think about the girls out there who actually have to go through scenarios like this just because it what they HAVE to do in order to "live" and "survive".

What I really liked about this was your motif of the two lines "How could I have done this to myself?" & "How could I ever have hurt myself like that?"

It served as a major impact towards me as a reader and it really worked well with the tone/mood of this piece.

Nice job, it was wonderfully written.

interesting character.
though the

and repeat, seemed out of place.

One of my favorite things you have ever written.

Wow...

I utterly adored that. The imagery was amazing. You protrayed her emotions so beautifully.

Wonderful lemon for a first try, love. I'll let you read mine, when it's on here. :3