 annoyance 2009-07-20 . chapter 1This story had a unique style of writing. I loved it :) |
 Hazelnut Romance 2009-03-21 . chapter 1nice. |
 Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-06-23 . chapter 1Awh it's cute :D
I like it. |
 Vanilla Tea 2008-04-19 . chapter 1The personality in the characters is shown well, and I like all the dialogue. A suggestion I have would be to add a little description of where they are, like, at least if they're standing, if they're sitting, if they're alone, etc.
--SB, courtesy of the review marathon (link in my profile if interested) |
 x3life 2008-03-08 . chapter 1aw this was so cute!! |
 MD Irvine 2007-12-14 . chapter 1I commend authors who are able to convey so much with first person because I can't seem to show enough or be detailed enough when I try to write that way.
The one shot did seem to move in a whirlwind for me, everything was there but it moved too fast. That could be because the setting is an argument and things tend to come out in a rush (her abusive relationship with Nick etc.) and in somewhat confusing circles but it all makes sense in the end when the parties have calmed down some.
I do think that Lexi's hesitation to say that she loved him was a nice realistic touch, even though she did she was still hurt. |
 lygophobic lullabies 2007-12-07 . chapter 1A bit cliche, but very sweet. |
 Lily Llynn 2007-12-06 . chapter 1It's cute and fluffy and good writing. (: I like it. Kudos to you for adding it to the c2! (: |
 w0ndering-s0ul 2007-12-06 . chapter 1aw this story is very good...i really hope it won't be like a one-shot..but even if it is it's very well written..i loved it...could you please review my story..click my profile and it'll be there..thank you |
 RogueRose91 2007-12-06 . chapter 1woah! Really intense story! lol by the way, that line you used "Bros before hoes" lol is that from the Transformers Movie? (i LUV that movie btw) good work Mizz! keep it up!
-Roguey91 |