Hehe you must be a bigger geek than I if the only thing you can think about is oxygen. What of the other elements? Like Zinc or Neon :) only joking but generally I like it. Feels like it could be a little longer. Anyway thanks for the review. And its always good to see a fellow Placebo fan by the way :) all the best

Crazy-O

Very simple, very good. Keep it up! It's a great poem.

My only thoughts are thoughts of you... I think you could just say my only thoughts are of you.. less repetitious and I think the shorter line might flow better with the piece... but thats just me

I like this.. the repetition is nice and its very sweet.. definitely a good description of love