 half-sketched.staccatos 2007-12-06 . chapter 1konban wa
What's your "Poetry Theory"?
And this was HYSTERICAL! I know, I know, I shouldn't be thinking that since it's a depressing, morbid piece and all -- but... just the simplicity with which you wrote it: "But it sure is rude of him" -- just so... it was funny, I don't know! Like, yes, it's his fault. That wasn't nice of him to die in your bed. It was just funny. :P I know: time for me to see the shrink, LoL.
The way you rhymed the last to lines -- that made it all the funnier. :)
*adds to favs*
Gute nacht, tomodachi
-Shan- |