|Reviews for Questionable Taste In Men|
| The Brilliance of the Mindless 2/17/08 . chapter 1
Wow. That was good. No, that's a lie. It was excellent! I loved it!
| NotMixedEqually 1/10/08 . chapter 1
Normally, I don't read poetry, but I actually really liked this. The first and last stanzas were my favorites. They were chilling and dark, but subtly so.
I really, really liked it.
Oh, and would mind clarifying something for me? The last line of the last stanza can be construed in two ways:
-she forgets that she's on the train tracks, as in, she doesn't care that she's on them (Hopefully, that made some kind of sense)
-she forgets about the train and it winds up hitting her
Originally, I took it to mean that she was hit, because it would fit with the rest of the poem, but I still want to just clear that up.
Awesome job with this!