delicate and stunning.

the first stanza captured me so well.
i must say, if you read it according to every
line coordinating with that one on the
stanza, you can developed a new poem
out of it, which is really cool. very
good poem, by the way.

The last line was just perfect; I couldn't have crafted a better ending. Amazing!

Forever (my 'lil music babyy!),

Stephen!:)

Truly a beautiful poem...I love the line break in half a full-moon night...and relating your delicate state of being to one thousand paper cranes paints a beautiful image...great job :)

This has really beautiful imagery, especially in the first verse. I love the ending as well.