Reviews for one thousand paper cranes

adsaige 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abusethe first stanza captured me so well. i must say, if you read it according to every line coordinating with that one on the stanza, you can developed a new poem out of it, which is really cool. very good poem, by the way.
painting andromeda 2008-01-04 ch 1,	abuseThe last line was just perfect; I couldn't have crafted a better ending. Amazing! Forever (my 'lil music babyy!), Stephen!:)
Daniel Ali 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseTruly a beautiful poem...I love the line break in half a full-moon night...and relating your delicate state of being to one thousand paper cranes paints a beautiful image...great job :)
hey maria 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseThis has really beautiful imagery, especially in the first verse. I love the ending as well.