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| Aspiring Author 2007-12-08 ch 1,  | abuseNeat! There were a few typos, but I'm sure you caught them. I like how you started the story, then when you got to that point in the actual narrative, it's so different! I'd like to see more of Tristan, I like him a lot. And what's the boyfriend's name? Yours, Asa |