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| WeAreBroken 2008-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseI recently took some tastes of my own, its all pretty hard to swallow. If she wasn't so amazing I just might have spit it all back out. Nice poem, short but nice. |
| Forgotten Legend 2008-08-20 ch 1, | abusedont go gay... its natural to be attracted to the same sex... i am sometimes but u can only have kids with opposite gender... |
| tearing hands 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseI think the metaphor between struggling with an idea and chewing is really effective. It could really apply to any struggle, and that makes it relatable to anyone. My favorite part is, "It leaves doubt on my tongue." Great work! |
| lost for words 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseWell put, this really describes the feeling. Favourite line: "It leaves doubt on my tongue" |
| Lady Fingers 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abusei love this poem, it's so simply and elegant, and i love how it could be about anything really...not sure about sexual orientation. awesome :] -stitched up stranger |
| thegirlisgonenow 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseOh, hon. You know I'm here if you need help chewing. Andrea can vouch for my gay-shrink abilities. This poem puts the confusion feeling very nicely. |
| shadows of a trackless sea 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseaw, well I hope that you soon fin dout so you can stop worrying and wondering. I liked how you campared it to eating something that you can't quite digest, nicely done. |
| Pillow Biter 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abusegreat depiction of a tough struggle! |