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midnightbeauty 2008-04-25 ch 26,	abuseHey there, I adore this story and the characters, btw :) I honestly don't know why you haven't gotten a gajillion reviews! Well, anywho, just wanted to say, you actually have to be on the pill for a full month before it really begins to work, taking it every fay at just about the same time, so it wouldn't have worked anyways. So, other than that, love the story doll! Kisses, midnightbeauty
adge24 2008-04-25 ch 32,	abuseThat's the end?! I want more! I loved it tho, but I wish i could see more.
adge24 2008-04-12 ch 31,	abuseWOW!! Awesome chapter! Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next! I can't believe you did that!! I can't wait to see what the surprise is in the next chapter!
adge24 2008-04-08 ch 30,	abuseWOW! I can't believe you let Mark go to jail; you say that I'll be surprised about what comes next, so I am looking forward to the next chapter very much. Keep up the awesome work, and please try to update again soon!
andiwishiremembered 2008-04-07 ch 30,	abuseGAH! do you realize how much you took this story over without me?? lol. i mean, we wrote this like...TWO summers ago! man we were good back then even. so totally snagging the rest of the story tomorrow morning. xoxo - kelsey
adge24 2008-03-28 ch 29,	abuseAwesome chapter! Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
LostinLov3 2008-03-28 ch 29,	abusei dont get why ryan walked out? how come nobody knoes what happened to andrea? the jury better not let that crazy ** win... anyway, i like the update. its good, i can feel the tension in the room. well... cant wait for more. i look forward to reading ur new story. have fun on spring break...
adge24 2008-03-27 ch 28,	abuseAwesome chapter! Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
KiyashiChan 2008-03-22 ch 27,	abuseOMG!! I love it!! I was a bit nervous when Riley and Ryan were fighting and I was like, "where is this going??" but now I can't wait for the next Chapter... Who did Andrea shoot?? And was that Mark ramming his car through t5he window?? So Many questions!! I can't wait till you update!!
Kim W 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseYou have no idea how hard it is to find a decent beginning to a story that draws a reader into actually reading the rest of it. You wrote one, though! It looks intriguing, indeed.
Cat Snads 2008-03-18 ch 3,	abusehi, in this chapter, it says that Matt is 4 years older than Riley, but that she is 17 and he is 22. i think you need to get the calculator out for any further maths because 22-17=5
adge24 2008-03-18 ch 27,	abuseI for one think the pregnancy is realistic...they didn't use protection, and if she wasn't on any birth control, its highly likely that she might get pregnant. I say, go with your original idea.
LostinLov3 2008-03-16 ch 26,	abuseAW! what gun shots??! no frickin way... i feel like the pregnancy thing doesnt really make sense. its not really realistic. but man, andrea is crazy, i already knew it! update quick!
LostinLov3 2008-03-16 ch 25,	abusewhat?!!?! she's pregnant! so soon? how long are they on this trip? damn, that just makes everything a mess. jazz is not to bright... i mean get ur grove on, but be smart... and at least ryan realizes what a retard he was and apologizes. sounds like they're the real deal now...
writemeup 2008-03-12 ch 23,	abuseWow the Mark and Jasmine thing just keeps getting better I can't wait to read more. The story is so cute though I'm really loving it. By the way why did you name chapter 22, Black Stripe?

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