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blah blah
2008-06-04
ch 1, anon.

abuseMeh, as i said in messenger, which you're never on, I'm redoing Forrester's. I think I'm gonna make it a tad bit darker. As in one of the football players, prolly Track or somebody, decides to use Adelaide in efforts to get back at Fielding. Only, in the end they don't fall in love and go la-di-dah-dah I'm so in love. Instead, I figure, he's gonna leave her preggo. And then ensues the angst. She'll get an abortion. But I might make her stupid and try to do it as a self-induced abortion. Afterwards, she'll move out with Uncle Robbie and I spose it'll end there. Here's what I've got so far.

"Face it girly," intoned Grandma Georgette, never once taking her eyes off of the field and it's rushing players. "You're as naive as they come. If someone purposely threw a bag of bricks at your head, you'd pass it off as the result of a heavy gust of wind."

I rolled my eyes in response. It was hard to take anything she said seriously when spittle came flying out of her mouth with every word spoken, and all I could focus on was the pink, floral shower cap covering her balding head. The spittle was forgiveable as she was out of denture adhesive, but the showercap was pointless as it looked worse than the bald patches among her still dark hair. Her hair never managed to gray, instead it decided falling out in clumps was a much more enjoyable experience.

"Don't you roll your eyes at me girl," she said, malice in tow, eyes still fixed on the field. It was amazing how she focused on anything else. "Listen to your elders. We've done experienced all you're experiencing. Hell, I only married Henry because Daddy forced us into it once I got pregnant. I never loved the bastard."

I narrowed my eyes at her. "That's a lie." She married Grandpa Henry because he was the only man willing to put up with her constant complaining and cursing.

She shrugged. "I know that, and you know that but Henry doesn't have to know that. It keeps him on his toes when I threaten to file for divorce."

meaiold
2007-12-08
ch 1, anon.

abuseAre you trying to tell the internet world something? Hm... Have you suddenly gone blind? GASP. Whatever shall I do? Actually, I liked this. Seems as if you've gotten your muse back. Challenges have been sent out, BTW.

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