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Reviews For: If I Could Remember The Sound of Your Name

The Double-Edged Rose
2008-03-06
ch 1,
Sounds a lot like you lost a really good friend, maybe even loved him? You knew this person for a short while, I could guess.

It's very sensual, and I love it!
Frosthold
2007-12-13
ch 1,
Beautiful! I really loved this. However, my only criticism is that the last line was not so much in keeping with the rest of the poem. Otherwise, great work!

-Frost
lordelfy
2007-12-10
ch 1,
Really really good, i can relate to this but kind of in a different view! Keep writing!
Possessed Pencil
2007-12-10
ch 1,
Oh, lovely and emotional! :)
angel1357
2007-12-07
ch 1,
Wow, that was an amazing one, really like it.
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