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| The Double-Edged Rose 2008-03-06 ch 1, | Sounds a lot like you lost a really good friend, maybe even loved him? You knew this person for a short while, I could guess. It's very sensual, and I love it! |
| Frosthold 2007-12-13 ch 1, | Beautiful! I really loved this. However, my only criticism is that the last line was not so much in keeping with the rest of the poem. Otherwise, great work! -Frost |
| lordelfy 2007-12-10 ch 1, | Really really good, i can relate to this but kind of in a different view! Keep writing! |
| Possessed Pencil 2007-12-10 ch 1, | Oh, lovely and emotional! :) |
| angel1357 2007-12-07 ch 1, | Wow, that was an amazing one, really like it. |