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| Alenor 2007-12-10 ch 11,  | abuseok, this is just confusing now because we don't know anything about what happened before to make her "poison" and we don't really know anything about either of them anyway. it's still well written, it just doesn't make much sense. |
| Alenor 2007-12-07 ch 5, | abusehmm...interesting... |
| Alenor 2007-12-06 ch 3, | abusehey, this could be interesting. i'm intrigued though, can't wait for more ~ Alenor. |