What the hell? I'm so confused. How did they pull off the switch like that? I don't think AJ was in it, but who the hell knows. Can you help me out here a little?

This is a strange and freaky story. I don't understand it, but I think that's the poitn. I'm only almost a third of the way done though so I'm not passing judgment or anything. You have good writing style.

OMG!AN EISLEY LOVER!

ok, this is just confusing now because we don't know anything about what happened before to make her "poison" and we don't really know anything about either of them anyway. it's still well written, it just doesn't make much sense.

hmm...interesting...

hey, this could be interesting. i'm intrigued though, can't wait for more ~ Alenor.