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| Inflaming Kaliope 2007-12-06 ch 1,   | I like this. The whole thing is awesome. “count the sheep till they overflow. count everything until nothing lasts.” Perfect way to end it. |
| with.You.in.mind 2007-12-06 ch 1, | i heard nyquil does wonders :] haha, aside from that, this is pretty deeply put. simple words describing a most complex and agonizing situation. i'm starting to fancy the quote, too! kudos |
| Noellen 2007-12-06 ch 1, | >.< This reminds me of a few years back, I used to never sleep. Good poem, I love how you described your breath as a soundtrack. That was cool =D |