i agree. i'd love to know. but for me, hes gone. so i moved on.
i hope its not the same for you.
sweets5

Simple but effective. Not sure if you will agree, but perhaps
change the question mark and have it after the "if you were here" and also maybe change the in around so it becomes
"I can hear you -
Only in my dreams;
I hear your voice

It makes me want to cry"

Nice work :)