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| songlawyer 2008-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseI am very impressed. Your writing technique is very good and you make the story flow very nicely. I also like how Jen seems to get sidetracked when she talks about something totally random and then chastises herself to the readers. If I met a guy like Brent, I would have slapped him like Jen should have, but he's so retardedly hilarious, it's worth it not to do that. I agree that you should consider writing a second book because the characters are very well-developed and a lot of people like this book. |
| amaryllisfaye 2008-07-01 ch 21, | abuseomg where can I buy myself a Brent? lol |
| PeterMoore 2008-06-30 ch 21, | abusei loved how you ended this story. it was great |
| Classychik 2008-04-13 ch 21, | abuseomg this was the best story I've read on here! you have a mixture of humor, drama, and love my fav combo!Good Job,(btw I rlly like your writing style! =] |
| the kitten 2008-03-18 ch 21, | abusethis is awesome! funny and so romantic at the same time! I wish I had a guy like that...*sigh* anyway, keep it up! |
| Oblivious.Only.To.You 2008-03-06 ch 21, | abuseyou know, i never got tired of this story. no matter how many times i read. it makes me so.. emotional. it's like, i feel every emotion the characters feel. Jennifer's pain and fear of her abusive dad, her love for Brent, Brent's passion for Jennifer... No matter how many times I read this story, it just got better and better. (i cry at the right times.. hint hint) oh hey did you ever consider making a sequel to this wonderful story? A story on Brent's point of view. I would like to know what his feelings were, on his side. Overall, I think you're an awesome writer, to make me feel so good after reading this. Write on :) you rock |
| Hopelessly Clueless 2008-02-11 ch 21, | abuseAw, I completely and utterly love this story! Love it, love it, love it!! You did an awesome job! :D |
| sjfhdvcevgfd 2008-02-08 ch 21, | abuseI LOVE IT. |
| Toiya 2008-02-05 ch 20, | abuseI just read the entire story and I have to admit, I was pleasantly surprised. I have to admit, there wasn't a single minute I felt something unnecessarily drawn out, or a point where I wasn't entertained. I really enjoyed this story and I hope to see more from you. :) |
| LivingMyLife 2008-02-01 ch 21, | abuseThat was a really great ending. I'm so happy that everything turned out alright. I really like that Brent can be so annoying yet so sweet. Get Job!! |
| Moonlit Promise 2008-02-01 ch 2, | abuseBabe? lmao, Like I said before. Poor girl. But I wish someone cute would like me. The made-up people always get the guy. Lol Gonna keep going 'cause this story definately got my attention! :] |
| Moonlit Promise 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuselmao, this sounds really interesting. She must have been cold. Poor girl. Lol Sounds like a nice story so i'll keep reading. |
| Qzz 2008-01-30 ch 21, | abuseWho!! awesome epilouge, i like how it kinda wraps everything up. now i feel like partying! Who! |
| sweetbabii45 2008-01-30 ch 21, | abuseI LVOE IT |
| LovelyxXxDreams 2008-01-30 ch 21, | abusewo! BABIES BABIES!! Happily ever after...with kids! muhahahaha! |