This poem is very true that you can live life with the one or when that one is gone it's like life was playing games with you throughout the whole time.

some people write for themselves, some people write for others. This poem couldn't survive in the latter catagory. show, don't tell. better yet - let me feel what you feel. narrow your view, give me a story.


as Kahlil Gibran said, "Don't write about men, write about a man."

don't write about love, write about a love. Right now, this poem looks in from the outside. I want to be on the inside.

best of luck, keep writing

I can feel a lot of emotion in this poem. It made me sad, but it was a well written poem!