Omg...this is so sad T_T
It reminded me of 'Rush' cause that one was sad too T_T
But I loved it!
I love your sad stories

OMG I HATE YOU!T_T wah why why...let them stay alive!T_T but I still love your stories

This was incredibly sad. I think that you truly have a talent, the images in this piece of writing are haunting and the narrative tone is wonderful.

Love the poem and love the story, it's just a pity that it's only a oneshot, even if that does do it justice.

gr. im the 9th. just missed it!

I like this story i hope that u can make another one like this its an extremely good story I read it right before i went to bed then i wrote it again when i woke up and everything its perfect well not perfect but i would give it a 10/10
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JAZ

LOVED THE POEM.. LOVED THE STORY :).. WELL WRITTEN

You, my friend, are an amazing writer. And I love the poem at the end. As sad as this fic was, it was very beautiful.

wow...

Very well written. It was really poetic, so the poem at the end tied in nicely. I found one mistake though, no biggie, "no body would come and save me. Not even you", it should be 'nobody'.

you write a lot of depressing stories! i like them. i know that it kind of makes me violent, but i like reading suicide stories. i don't think i've written any, but i'm not sure. good story, good poem too. if i knew you in real life, you would probably be my idol, and maybe my friend too! good story!

Wow. I mean like.. WOW. I love it.

Awesome piece! I absolutely adore it. The passitivity of the character, the descriptions, everything is incredible. And the language is beautiful. I think the poem was unnecessary; the story was a poem itself!