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| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abusepuncuation decides if a poem pauses or breaks, sometimes lines or new stanza do as well, if the formatting is drastic enough. I can't say I like your style or your subject, but you do it well. Try reading Stephen King's On Writing - it's a good book and has some interesting view points I think you should consider. best of luck. |
| softer side of apples 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abusePOWERFUL! |